Transport and environment

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Writing: Some people think intenational car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution, others think there are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Of those issues that have concerned the governments and public throughout the world, limiting the air pollution resulting from the car emissions is one of the most prominent. Some people suppose that organizing the international car-free days is the best way to solve this problem, others think that there are better ways instead of not using cars. Personally, I totally agree with this particular way.

It is incontrovertible that there are a large number of ways to control the pollution besides using the car-free days. In particular, the conveyance should ensure the fit between the fuel and engine, enhance the quality of the fuel consumed for the vehicles, use the backend system in the car for exhaust filter before emission into the environment. Additionally, the governments ought to improve the awareness of the communities about reducing the air pollution and checking quadrilateral the level of emissions according to the regulation.

However, I suppose international car-free days is the most effective way compared with those ways. Firstly, if people did not use cars for works, they might use bicycles to go to the office and travel resulting in the decrease of not only air pollution but also traffic jam. Moreover, the health of communities could be improved thanks to riding bicycles on a daily basis. In addition, if the citizen used some kinds of public transports such as buses, trains, subways, the cost of traveling must decrease which contribute to the living standard.

In conclusion, although there are plenty of arguments both for and against international car-free days, it seems to me that that way are more likely to be effective if the governments in the world use it for reducing air pollution purposes.