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Gene 2596 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Translation review needed

If someone could review the following translation, please. Something just doesn't feel right here, especially in the middle section. Thank you.
"Welcome to our company website.
At Max Transportation we strive to do our best to fully satisfy
our customers' needs. In business for over seven years, we are
constantly growing and improving our infrastructure.One of our
goals is to make sure that our customers and our drivers are highly
satisfied with our company. That is why we provide top-rated equipment,
which is being serviced frequently to ensure maximum reliability.

Our drivers are pleased to work in a friendly environment and are
enjoying our great per mile rates and a flexible work schedule. We
offer full time / part time job positions to fully synchronize with our
drivers' abilities and their current needs.

If you think Max Transportation can help you meet your
business needs and improve your experience with transportation,
please do not hesitate to contact us by phone, e-mail or by using
our convenient contact form."
  

Top answer

If you strive to do your best, you sometimes fail to do your best. That's not what you want to say. At Max Transportation, we always do our best to fully satisfy our customers' needs.

— Enoon

  • If you strive to do your best, you sometimes fail to do your best.
  • That's not what you want to say.
  • At Max Transportation, we always do our best to fully satisfy our customers' needs.
  • In business for over seven years, we are constantly growing and improving our infrastructure.
  • One of our goals is to make sure that both our customers and our drivers are highly satisfied with our company.
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If you strive to do your best, you sometimes fail to do your best. That's not what you want to say.

At Max Transportation, we always do our best to fully satisfy
our customers' needs. In business for over seven years, we are
constantly growing and improving our infrastructure. One of our
goals is to make sure that both our customers and our drivers are highly
satisfied
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gene 2596In business for over seven years, we are constantly growing and improving our infrastructure.
Infrastructure most often refers to a company's internal computing systems, or perhaps their physical plant.
It looks a bit weird as the second sentence of introduction on the web site.
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If you think of infrastructure as the facilities and equipment used to carry out the operations of the company, I think it would work.
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Thank you very much. It looks much better now... Emotion: smile
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Thank all of you guys, for your quick replies. I was also thinking of having it look like this: "In business for over seven years, we are constantly growing and evolving" ? Word "Infrastructure" refers to facilities and equipment, but to be honest with you I don't like using it either. I also think there should be something in this sentence after word "evolving" ?
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gene 2596"In business for over seven years, we are constantly growing and evolving"
That's much better.
If you want to add more words, you could say something like this
.... evolving our products and services to keep up with the latest advances in technology.
.... evolving our products and services to be ahead of the competition.
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