translation into English: text 11/03 (Patrick)

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00Here is a translation I made. Would you please correct it for me?02br
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00- Comment va Patrick? demanda Catherine. Je ne l’ai pas vu depuis des semaines. 02br
00- Moi non plus. Mais il va bien, répondit Thomas. Il m’a téléphoné ce matin pour me dire qu’il allait partir travailler en Irlande dès qu’il aurait fini ses examens. 02br
00- Vraiment? Mais … il n’est jamais allé à l’étranger, et je ne me rappelle pas l’avoir entendu parler de projets aussi hardis. Et en plus il est nul en anglais! 02br
00- Il n’est pas nécessaire de mettre tout le monde au courant de ce qu’on a envie de faire. Il y a des tas de gens qui rêvent bruyamment d’accomplir de grandes choses et ne sortent jamais de chez eux. Quant à son niveau d’anglais, un séjour de deux mois ne peut que l’améliorer. 02br
00- Tu as certainement raison. Mais je suis déçue. On se connaît depuis si longtemps, lui et moi… il aurait du m’en parler. Moi aussi j’aimerais beaucoup aller travailler en Irlande. Il aurait pu me donner des renseignements ou des conseils. 02br
00- Il y a peut-être pensé. Mais après tout, tu es assez grande pour prendre tes décisions toute seule, non? Allons, ne sois pas triste, il se peut qu’il t’appelle ce soir. 02br
00- Si c’est dans ses intentions, il ferait mieux de se dépêcher parce que je pars aux Etats Unis ans trois jours. J’ai trouvé un travail de serveuse dans un restaurant japonais à Manhattan. 00Et toi, tu fais quoi cet été?02br
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00“How is Patrick?” Catherine asked. I have not seen him for weeks. 02br
00“Neither have I. But he is fine, Thomas answered. He gave me a call/rang me this morning to tell me he was going to work in 010200, as soon as his exams were over.”02br
00“Really? But... he has never been abroad and I can't remember hearing him talk about such bold projects. Moreover, he is terrible/hopeless at English / his English is so poor!”02br
00“It's not necessary to inform / You needn’t tell everybody about what you want to do / feel like doing. A lot of people dream aloud (?) about accomplishing great things and they never leave their homes / get out of their houses. As far as his English is concerned, a two-month stay can only improve it.” 02br
00“You're certainly right but I'm disappointed. The two / Both of us have known each other for such a long time... He could have told me about his plan. I would love to work in 010200, too. He could have given me some information or advice.” 02br
00“Maybe he has thought about it. But after all, you are mature/old enough to make your own decisions, aren't you? Come on! Don't be sad. He may call you tonight. 02br
00“If he wants to do so / If he intends to do so, he had better hurry (up) because I'm leaving for the 010200 in three days. I have found a job as a waitress in a Japanese restaurant in 00. And you? What are you doing this summer?” 02br
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00 Thank you for your help.02br
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00Hela 0-