Translation into English 19/02

0Dear teachers,02br
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00If you wouldn't mind, could you please correct my translations?02br
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01b001)02b00 Seuls les portes claquaient et les verres s’entrechoquaient.02br
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00Only (the?) doors banged / slammed and (the?) glasses clattered.02br
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01b002)02b00 Cela sentait fort le poisson dans le hall.02br
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00It stank out fish / There was a strong smell of fish in the hall.02br
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01b003)02b00 Il se redressa, marmonna un merci, et quitta la salle.02br
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00He stood up, mumbled a ‘thank you / thanks (?)’, and left the room.02br
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00Do I need to use inverted commas around "thank you" ?02br
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01b004)02b00 Le dimanche il continuait à se promener lentement dans le parc.02br
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00On Sunday / Sundays (both possible?) he kept strolling along the park.02br
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01b005)02b00 Le frou-frou de sa robe s’estompa derrière la porte.02br
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00The rustling of her dress faded away behind the door.02br
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01b006)02b00 La femme chantait une chanson un peu oubliée, un peu démodée et il se surprit à en marmonner les paroles.02br
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00The woman was singing a song a rather forgotten, out of fashion / old fashioned (?) and he found himself (?) mumbling the / its (?) words.02br
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01b007)02b00 Il avait une quarante ans à peine et on le trouvait extrêmement sympathique.02br
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00He was just about forty and he was thought to be extremely friendly.02br
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01b008)02b00 Ainsi vivaient-ils, eux et leurs amis. Ils n’étaient pas malheureux, ils se promenaient en bavardant pendant des heures jusqu’à la pointe du jour. 02br
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00That was / is (?) how they and their friends lived. They were not unhappy, they strolled along chatting for hours until the early hours / until dawn. 02br
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01b009)02b00 Les derniers coups de minuit venaient de retentir.02br
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00The last strokes of midnight had just rung.02br
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01b0010)02b00 Il m’a considéré avec incertitude et puis me fixa dans les yeux.02br
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00He looked at (?) me with some hesitation (?) then looked at me in the eye.02br
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01b0011)02b00 Il y a des étoiles qui vacillent comme la flamme mourante d’une bougie.02br
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00There are stars that flicker like the dying flame of a candle.02br
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01b0012)02b00 De temps à autre elle jetait un coup d’oeil par la vitre du taxi.02br
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00Now and again she glanced out of the window of the taxi / cab.02br
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01b0013)02b00 Mondo sentait la lumière qui caressait son visage et son coeur battait au ralenti.02br
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00Mondo felt the light stroking / caressing his face and his heart was beating at a slower pace (??).02br
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01b0014)02b00 Je criais, je hurlais, j’étouffais. = I was shouting, I was screaming, I was choking.02br
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01b0015)02b00 00Les gens qui agressent les autres devraient être punis. 02br
00 00People who bully (other possibility ?) the others should be punished00. 02br
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00I hope that you didn't find that too long.02br
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00Thank you VERY MUCH in advance for your help.02br
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00Hela0-