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Gerda Viks Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Hello!

I am translating a text from my mothertongue into English. Some of the sentences are really complicated for me even in my mothertongue and I would appreciate if you could help me to find out the mistakes in those long and confusing sentences as often I don't know the order of the words in the sentences.


1. Students characterized public law’s docent Julia Laffranque on the University of Tartu Faculty of Law’s Aasta Nägu 2010 testimonial as follows: „It is to do with a lecturer and a woman who just manages incredibly much and regardless of her youth she has already accomplished very much.


2. Firstly, a fresh judge in European Court of Human Rights is one of (most) the eye-catching careered woman in Estonian land of law.

3. In 2009, there was given an international award for independent defense for judges to Consultative Council of European Judges, which was conducted by her.

4.In the field of law it is hard to overvalue the importance of acknowledgment given by the foundation of Justice in the World, it (which) has been compared for instance to the Nobel Peace Prize.
5.Secondly, she is differentiated from most of her male and female counterparts by the passionate love to theater.

Thank you in advance!


  

Top answer

First, I would reorganize the word order to make these sentences clearer. I have to guess at some of the meaning, but here is my suggested wording. Please use what is helpful.

  • First, I would reorganize the word order to make these sentences clearer.
  • I have to guess at some of the meaning, but here is my suggested wording.
  • Please use what is helpful.
  • 1.
  • Students characterized public law's docent Julia Laffranque on the University of Tartu Faculty of Law's Aasta Nägu 2010 testimonial as follows: „It is to do with a lecturer and a woman who just manages incredibly much and regardless of her youth she has already accomplished very much.
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First, I would reorganize the word order to make these sentences clearer. I have to guess at some of the meaning, but here is my suggested wording. Please use what is helpful.

1. Students characterized public law's docent Julia Laffranque on the University of Tartu Faculty of Law's Aasta Nägu 2010 testimonial as follows: „It is to do with a lecturer and a woman who just manages

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