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Michael went up to the window. "Just look at this view. These mountains are so beautiful they seem to beckon us on to them."
“Yes, they are so lovely.”
“Hello, ah, it’s you! How are you, Tom? Congratulations a house and a yacht that’s great! Want to succeed ? Don’t want to risk? I see . That’s enough, I guess. Where? In the downtown area? We will be neighbors then. When are you going to move?”
"I have to sell my flat, Michael. The sooner the better, you know. Now I can think of getting married. I will be glad to see you with Sarah in my new apartment as soon as I move there."
"Thanks we will come . Sarah is sending her greetings to you. You come too. I am sure you enjoy the view of the mountains outside our windows. It’s really relaxing."
Tom was very busy with a lot of things to do. He sold his flat, went to his new house. Having had all his affairs done he decided to call Michael and Sarah to invite them to his place.
Tom wasn’t able to contact them. Both Sarah’s and Michael’s mobiles couldn’t be reached. “They might be on their trip.” He thought.
Could you please correct this translation?
Michael went up to the window. "Just look at this view. These mountains are so beautiful they seem to beckon us on to them."
“Yes, they are so lovely.”
“Hello, ah, it’s you! How are you, Tom? Congratulations a house and a yacht that’s great! Want to succeed ? Don’t want to risk? I see . That’s enough, I guess. Where? In the downtown area? We will be neighbors then. When are you going to move?”
"I have to sell my flat, Michael. The sooner the better, you know. Now I can think of getting married. I will be glad to see you with Sarah in my new apartment as soon as I move there."
"Thanks we will come . Sarah is sending her greetings to you. You come too. I am sure you enjoy the view of the mountains outside our windows. It’s really relaxing."
Tom was very busy with a lot of things to do. He sold his flat, went to his new house. Having had all his affairs done he decided to call Michael and Sarah to invite them to his place.
Tom wasn’t able to contact them. Both Sarah’s and Michael’s mobiles couldn’t be reached. “They might be on their trip.” He thought.
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I would make a few small changes (these changes are in bold print). Some of the changes in punctuation may be too small to see. However, I am guessing at the situation being depicted.
- I would make a few small changes (these changes are in bold print).
- Some of the changes in punctuation may be too small to see.
- However, I am guessing at the situation being depicted.
- So keep that in mind.
- Michael went up to the window.
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I would make a few small changes (these changes are in bold print). Some of the changes in punctuation may be too small to see. However, I am guessing at the situation being depicted. So keep that in mind.
Michael went up to the window. "Just look at this view. These mountains are so beautiful. They seem to beckon us on to them."
"Yes, they are s
Michael went up to the window. "Just look at this view. These mountains are so beautiful. They seem to beckon us on to them."
"Yes, they are s
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