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It was exactly how she did it. In the drugstore she was already wearing a new pair of gloves.
But money? Where could they have been hidden?
The probationer wanted to return that case to the archives when suddenly a small detail draw his attention.
They had a two-storeyd house. The stair in the house leads from the sitting-room to the second floor.
Their sleeping-room is situated at the end of a long corridor on the second floor. How could they hear Nick's voice downstairs in the sitting room. He decided to talk to the detective who pursued the case of the policeman. But he was out of town then. He decided talk to his boss (can I use the word boss?).
And shortly after he was granted the permission for reconsideration of the case.
It was exactly how she did it. In the drugstore she was already wearing a new pair of gloves.
But money? Where could they have been hidden?
The probationer wanted to return that case to the archives when suddenly a small detail draw his attention.
They had a two-storeyd house. The stair in the house leads from the sitting-room to the second floor.
Their sleeping-room is situated at the end of a long corridor on the second floor. How could they hear Nick's voice downstairs in the sitting room. He decided to talk to the detective who pursued the case of the policeman. But he was out of town then. He decided talk to his boss (can I use the word boss?).
And shortly after he was granted the permission for reconsideration of the case.
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Is this all one story? It seems to be missing information that a complete story would have. However, let me first suggest corrections to the individual sentences.
- Is this all one story?
- It seems to be missing information that a complete story would have.
- However, let me first suggest corrections to the individual sentences.
- The new wording [or notes] are in boldface; the old wording is crossed out.
- It was exactly how she did it.
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Is this all one story? It seems to be missing information that a complete story would have. However, let me first suggest corrections to the individual sentences. The new wording [or notes] are in boldface; the old wording is crossed out.
It was exactly how she did it. In the drugstore she was already wearing a new pair of gloves.
But money? Where could they [us
It was exactly how she did it. In the drugstore she was already wearing a new pair of gloves.
But money? Where could they [us
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Hello,
Thank you very much. I posted several extracts from a story and this is why it seems to be missing information.
Thank you very much. I posted several extracts from a story and this is why it seems to be missing information.
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