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Sasako Posted 18 years ago
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Good evening,

could you please tell me if the following sentence is correct? Or is there a way to experss otherwise what is expressed in it?

In the German hunting system, there are shooting preserves where licensed hunters can lease the hunting rights.

Thank you
sasako
  

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sasako In the German hunting system, there are shooting preserves where licensed hunters can lease the hunting rights. Not substantially better than your version but less wordy and more natural sounding to my ear. In Germany there are preserves where licensed hunters can lease the rights.

— RayH

  • sasako In the German hunting system, there are shooting preserves where licensed hunters can lease the hunting rights.
  • Not substantially better than your version but less wordy and more natural sounding to my ear.
  • In Germany there are preserves where licensed hunters can lease the rights.
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sasakoIn the German hunting system, there are shooting preserves where licensed hunters can lease the hunting rights.
Not substantially better than your version but less wordy and more natural sounding to my ear.

In Germany there are preserves where licensed hunters can lease the rights.
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Thank you very much, I think you´re right, this sounds more naturally.
I wanted to put out the difference to other hunting systems, this is why I expressed myself so complicated...but I guess it would be sound better when expressed a little shorter.
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