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Hexapoda Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Translating a speech and I hate it...
0 Following senteces are part of a formal speech that I'm translating for practice. 00 But I'm not quite satisfied with the last sentence... I feel like it should be more polite and formal... 00 Do they sound OK? Any suggestions? 00 The basic meaning that the sentence should convey is that since developled countries have already dealt with the low fertility and aging society issue beforehand, the speaker wants them to share their experties on that with Korea. 02 br
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00 Only one thing though...the sentence should contain words like 'hope, wisdom, experience'.... 02 br
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01 b 00 In my understanding, developed countries participating today’s Forum faced the same problem two to three decades ago, and have been working hard to cope with it since. 00 So, I hope you share your wisdom and experience that you aquired while dealing with low fertility and aging society issues with us today. 02 b 02 br
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00 Only one thing though...the sentence should contain words like 'hope, wisdom, experience'.... 02 br
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01 b 00 In my understanding, developed countries participating today’s Forum faced the same problem two to three decades ago, and have been working hard to cope with it since. 00 So, I hope you share your wisdom and experience that you aquired while dealing with low fertility and aging society issues with us today. 02 b 02 br
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1 i 01 b 00 It is 02 b 00 my understanding 01 b 00 that the 02 b 00 developed countries participating 01 b 00 in 02 b 00 today’s 01 b 00 forum 02 b 00 faced the same 01 b 00 problems 02 b 00 two 01 b 00 or 02 b 00 three decades 01 b 00 ago and 02 b 00 have been working hard to 01 b 00 deal 02 b 00 with it since. 02 br 02 br 02 i 00 0-
- 1 i 01 b 00 It is 02 b 00 my understanding 01 b 00 that the 02 b 00 developed countries participating 01 b 00 in 02 b 00 today’s 01 b 00 forum 02 b 00 faced the same 01 b 00 problems 02 b 00 two 01 b 00 or 02 b 00 three decades 01 b 00 ago and 02 b 00 have been working hard to 01 b 00 deal 02 b 00 with it since.
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1 i 01 b 00 It is 02 b 00 my understanding 01 b 00 that the 02 b 00 developed countries participating 01 b 00 in 02 b 00 today’s 01 b 00 forum 02 b 00 faced the same 01 b 00 problems 02 b 00 two 01 b 00 or 02 b 00 three decades 01 b 00 ago and 02 b 00 have been working hard t
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0 Thank you for your correction! 02 br
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00 They sound much better for sure 01 b 00 : ) 02 b 0-
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00 They sound much better for sure 01 b 00 : ) 02 b 0-
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