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Looking to pay, she tries to signal the waitress again, but she still doesn't see her. Instead, as she waits, she takes out a book from her purse and starts to read it.
Does this read well? Is the punctuation perfect?
Is "instead" perfect here to connect the two sentences?
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Looking to pay, she tries to signal the waitress again, but she still doesn't see her. Instead, as she waits, she takes out a book from her purse and starts to read it. she still doesn't see her.
- Looking to pay, she tries to signal the waitress again, but she still doesn't see her.
- Instead, as she waits, she takes out a book from her purse and starts to read it.
- she still doesn't see her.
- I don't understand which of these two people is the waitress and which is the customer.
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Looking to pay, she tries to signal the waitress again, but she still doesn't see her. Instead, as she waits, she takes out a book from her purse and starts to read it.
she still doesn't see her. I don't understand which of these two people is the waitress and which is the customer.
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