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K.Shankar Posted 21 years ago

Transiently Permanent

0 Sometimes a thunderbolt will shoot from a clear sky; 02br
00and sometimes, into the midst of a peaceful family 02br
00without warning of gathered storm above or 02br
00slightest tremble of earthquake beneath 02br
00will fall a terrible fact, 02br
00and from that moment everything is changed 02br
00The air is thick with cloud, and cannot weep itself clear, 02br
00There may come a gorgeous sunset, though 02br
00for the world is filled with transiences which 02br
00emulates itself in a veil of permanence 0-
  

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0I don't warm to the oxymoronic title-- it seems to belittle your statement. 02br 02br 00After your first careful semicolon, you have failed to punctuate adequately. 02br 02br 00This is a wonderful phrase: 'The air...

  • 0I don't warm to the oxymoronic title-- it seems to belittle your statement.
  • 02br 02br 00After your first careful semicolon, you have failed to punctuate adequately.
  • 02br 02br 00This is a wonderful phrase: 'The air...
  • cannot weep itself clear'.
  • I bow to your Muse.
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0I don't warm to the oxymoronic title-- it seems to belittle your statement. 02br
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00After your first careful semicolon, you have failed to punctuate adequately. 02br
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00This is a wonderful phrase: 'The air... cannot weep itself clear'. I bow to your Muse. 02br
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00Grammatically, you have: 'transiences which emulates itself
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0 Thanks Mr. Micawber for your valuble comments. 02br
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001) Oxymoron may some times serve the purpose of captivating & you are right in your observation. 02br
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002) Well yes, I now see it - the punctuation is really bad. Will take care in future. 02br
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003) Thanks for your compliment - Even I liked it05000-02br
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0 i really like the poem...its a good discription of life 02br
00and how things always have hope 02br
00empowering i guess 02br
00keep up the good work:) 0-

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