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Third World Clown Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Transforming relative clauses into appositives

Hi,
I was recently helping a relative with a homework that required the students to transform relative clauses into appositives. There was one particular sentence that sounded odd to me, and hence stayed in my head. I would like to know your opinion about it:

Justin Bieber, whom many people love, is a singer.

If I am correct , whom many people love is the relative clause, but trying to turn it into an appositive made it sound odd to my ear:

Justin Bieber, loved by many people, is a singer.

What are your thoughts? Maybe you would have done it differently, or maybe I just wrongly identified the relative clause (I am a bit confused by the wording of the sentence, because I would have expected the relative clause to be written Justin Bieber is a singer whom many people love).

Thank you in advance
  

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I suspect that the answer is supposed to be Justin Bieber is a singer loved by many people. The other way round doesn't quite work, somehow.

  • I suspect that the answer is supposed to be Justin Bieber is a singer loved by many people.
  • The other way round doesn't quite work, somehow.
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I suspect that the answer is supposed to be

Justin Bieber is a singer loved by many people.
The other way round doesn't quite work, somehow.
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How about this?
Justin Bieber, a singer, is loved by many people.

Clive
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TWC;
Clive is right. An appositive is a noun.
"loved by many people" is a modifier, not a noun.

The instructions are confusing, because the whole sentence, not the clause, needs to be restructured.

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Please start a new thread. This has nothing to do with what is being discussed here.

Thank you
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If written correctly it would have read .... ' WHO many people love' ......... then it wouldn't have sounded odd to you. You are quite right to hear that WHOM as distinctly clunky.

JB - as the subject - is WHO. The object of a sentence deserves the WHOM. e.g. Who do many people love? He is loved by whom?
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It is true that he is the subject of the sentence: JB (...) is a singer.

However, if we look at the appositive on its own, whom many people love, it seems to me that he is the object of their loving, i.e., they love him.

However, I might be dead wrong.
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The sentence has no object. 'the singer' is a complement, realized by a nominal phrase, and 'whom many people love' is a relative clause.
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It's a poor question, and the best I can offer is

Justin Bieber, a favourite of the people, is a singer.

And even this would only sound sensible in a context encouraging greater cohesiveness because there are really two sentences' worth of information:

_ Entertainers are not very popular these days, wouldn't you say?

_Well, Justin Bieber,

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