Transfer Application

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I am a certificated teacher and currently I am working as Incharge in ABC School. I have been working at this Station for the last six years. As my working station is far from my hometown I have to stay in a rented room away from my family which is effecting my social and domestic life. Besides, my family is experiencing some problems too. Especially, my long absence adversely affects the education of my kids. Therefore I request your consideration to transfer me from my position as certificated teacher in ABC School to the same position in XYZ School.

Thanks in anticipation.