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Trailer of advanced movies
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My family didn't have a barbecue on Moon Festival this year. Instead, we went shopping in a shopping mall. There were crowds of people in the mall. First, there was a sales exhibition of furniture. We saw some people discussing the furnitures whether they were nice. We picked and made a purchase of some useful pieces of furniture. Next, there were also an aerobatic display to attract attention, and the performance made everybody happy. Then, on the big screen on the wall, we saw the trailer of some advanced movies featuring special effects. Later, we strolled the food court to buy some snacks, such as meat balls, potato chips, cotton candy, grilled fish. We were walking and eating. Finally, we moved to a restaruant to enjoy a delicious meal. It's decoration was elegant and in good taste. On the wall, there were some inspirational words which encourage people to do good deeds. I had a pleasant meal there. Eventually, we went home happily.
My family didn't have a barbecue on Moon Festival this year. Instead, we went shopping in a shopping mall. There were crowds of people in the mall. First, there was a sales exhibition of furniture. We saw some people discussing the furnitures whether they were nice. We picked and made a purchase of some useful pieces of furniture. Next, there were also an aerobatic display to attract attention, and the performance made everybody happy. Then, on the big screen on the wall, we saw the trailer of some advanced movies featuring special effects. Later, we strolled the food court to buy some snacks, such as meat balls, potato chips, cotton candy, grilled fish. We were walking and eating. Finally, we moved to a restaruant to enjoy a delicious meal. It's decoration was elegant and in good taste. On the wall, there were some inspirational words which encourage people to do good deeds. I had a pleasant meal there. Eventually, we went home happily.
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My family didn't have a barbecue during the Moon Festival this year. Instead, we went shopping in a shopping mall. There were crowds of people in the mall.
- My family didn't have a barbecue during the Moon Festival this year.
- Instead, we went shopping in a shopping mall.
- There were crowds of people in the mall.
- First, there was a display of furniture for sale.
- We saw some people discussing whether the furniture was nice.
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My family didn't have a barbecue during the Moon Festival this year. Instead, we went shopping in a shopping mall. There were crowds of people in the mall. First, there was a display of furniture for sale. We saw some people discussing whether the furniture was nice. We purchased some useful pieces of furniture.
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