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Blueblooded65 Posted 14 years ago
Vocabulary

traces of weeping???!!!

hi

is this sentence right?
her eyes were swollen and the traces of weeping were still clear on her eyes
  

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'Clear' seems a little odd here because it is a bit ambiguous; I would use ' evident '. 'On' her eyes?! Perhaps 'around her eyes'.

  • 'Clear' seems a little odd here because it is a bit ambiguous; I would use ' evident '.
  • 'On' her eyes?!
  • Perhaps 'around her eyes'.
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'Clear' seems a little odd here because it is a bit ambiguous; I would use 'evident'. 'On' her eyes?! Perhaps 'around her eyes'.
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i mean for example her eyes were red.
so can i say, "the traces of weeping were still evident in her eyes."

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