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Tourism is one of the most important of the global economy. It create billions of money and millions of jobs worldwide. It is considered by many communities, especially in emerging countries the only tool for development, and the only chance for...

Tourism is one of the most important of the global economy. It create billions of money and millions of jobs worldwide. It is considered by many communities, especially in emerging countries the only tool for development, and the only chance for increasing the quality of life. Thus nowaday, many countries endeavor have orientation that become a development country of tourist. Nonetheless at the same time, tourism started to show the negative side. In the present, I think that the impacts of tourism on society from four elementls: economic, social and cultural, and environmental. From the economic, the tourism stimulate wealth fare, enrich and jobs, but i think in some aspect it not sustainable. From the social-cultural, tourism is a bedrock to brings together people from different backgrounds and specially it promotes peace and active social change. But at the same time, due to globalization, many communities have lost their cultural identity and lost functioning condition favourable of political, society into national.

Last but not least, tourism helped create multinational, solidarity and protected areas, becomes a place more interdependent, more cooperation, more integration and more intimately. But in next side it have problem of outcome of tourism. Tourist can also be blamed cause

disrespect to local traditions and the environment. However, i think with the nowaday vision, not only Viet Nam but also another countries are opening boundaries, transcend the limited of nation to coordination, progress enhance and enable to strengthen the resource of energy inside national

  

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