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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Touching movie
Is the following sentence acceptable?
After the touching movie about reunion was shown at the YouTube Website, their story has become world-famous.
After the touching movie about reunion was shown at the YouTube Website, their story has become world-famous.
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A "movie" is a bit long for you tube. Note the many differences between mine and yours, especially the tenses. After the touching video about their reunion was shown on YouTube, their story became world famous.
- A "movie" is a bit long for you tube.
- Note the many differences between mine and yours, especially the tenses.
- After the touching video about their reunion was shown on YouTube, their story became world famous.
- Since the touching video about their reunion was shown on YouTube, their story has become world famous
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A "movie" is a bit long for you tube.
Note the many differences between mine and yours, especially the tenses.
After the touching video about their reunion was shown on YouTube, their story became world famous.
Since the touching video about their reunion was shown on YouTube, their story has become world famous
Note the many differences between mine and yours, especially the tenses.
After the touching video about their reunion was shown on YouTube, their story became world famous.
Since the touching video about their reunion was shown on YouTube, their story has become world famous
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