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Phamthephong100 Posted 18 years ago
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Topic: What under my bed ? - check and correct please.
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Topic: What under my bed?
When I was a child, I always feel frighten when thinking about what under my bed. May be that was a monster with red eyes and sharp teeth or a witch with a broom or just darkness. Some ones which are alder than me told me that there always a older man kidnapping bad children. Now I am no longer believe such stories but there are still a bit of frighten in my mind at night.
Topic: What under my bed?
When I was a child, I always feel frighten when thinking about what under my bed. May be that was a monster with red eyes and sharp teeth or a witch with a broom or just darkness. Some ones which are alder than me told me that there always a older man kidnapping bad children. Now I am no longer believe such stories but there are still a bit of frighten in my mind at night.
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Topic: What was under my bed? When I was a child, I always felt frightened when thinking about what might be under my bed. Maybe it was a monster with red eyes and sharp teeth , or a witch with a broom , or just darkness.
- Topic: What was under my bed?
- When I was a child, I always felt frightened when thinking about what might be under my bed.
- Maybe it was a monster with red eyes and sharp teeth , or a witch with a broom , or just darkness.
- Some children who were older than me told me that there was always an old man who kidnapped bad children there .
- Now I no longer believe such stories , but there is still a bit of fear in my mind at night.
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Topic: What was under my bed?
When I was a child, I always felt frightened when thinking about what might be under my bed. Maybe it was a monster with red eyes and sharp teeth, or a witch with a broom, or just darkness. Some children who were older than me told me that there was always an old man who kidnapped b
Topic: What was under my bed?
When I was a child, I always felt frightened when thinking about what might be under my bed. Maybe it was a monster with red eyes and sharp teeth, or a witch with a broom, or just darkness. Some children who were older than me told me that there was always an old man who kidnapped b
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