People have different views about the choice after graduating from high school. While those probaly decide to obtain a job right, I still believe that is better to get educational higher.
The option to get a job straight is definitely attractive to some extent. Apparently, it is common sense that people who can earn a living as their profession help them stronger than other person opt to live dependently on their parrent. In addition, the ability of controlling the finance make each individual feel more instinctly mature and confident. If these who want to build the best life, they must be able to buy anything for their life without asking another for costs. Furthemore, this decision leads to independent other habits because this prepare them to solve problems alone as adult. As a result, It is not advisable that people should take this option.
On the other hand, it seems to me that high school graduates should choose to study at university or college because of its beneficial education. Firstly, that educated people in advance degree will have more likely to get promotion easily. For instance, my sister who has just left The College of SG Tourist found the more benefit of education she had the better she acquired salary. Secondly, these student will develop personallity completely and have plenty of scope broading the knowledge from the perspective of learning.
In conclusion, although the upon views is agrued, studying continually at university or college is the best suitable way to achieve success in ther career.
Written by Tuyen.
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Tuyen. This is a good start, and you try very hard, but you make many mistakes. I have highlighted some of them. Please try to correct your writing.
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