TOPIC: People are becoming too dependent on the Internet these days.

The Internet is used by a number of, if not all, people around the world. In fact, these days, the Internet is necessary for many things such as communication. The Internet is one of many tools of communication; however, some kind of things have been completely changed as a result of the development of the internet such as the bills. In certain companies they used to send bills by mail before. However, they shifted to digital mail which uses the Internet when they send bills. While the Internet is very useful, I believe that people are becoming too dependent on the Internet these days for two reasons.

First of all, there is a possibility that the whole date of a company or individuals may be stolen easily. These days, security system on the Internet has become stronger. However, there are still many possibilities of hacking. Moreover, the Internet is easier for stealers to steal data with than other tools. If you have some real things such as money stolen, you can notice it easily. On the other hand, it is difficult to notice when you have your personal information stolen on the Internet.

Second, there is a possibility that if the internet is not working, the whole society will be stopped forcibly. If the people keep depending on the Internet when it stops working or becomes inaccessible, all the data which are stored on the Internet will be virtually nonexistent. Peole can't use their data until at least when the Internet is fixed. As a result, if we still depend on the Internet, the socirty will stop working, and we will be forced to spend time which has many obstacles.

For the above two reasons, I agree with the opinion that people are becoming too dependent on the Internet these days.