The digital revolution has affected to our daily life especially the way people connect with each other. Some people say technology has developed in a positive way but others think it has changed our life not well as we expect. In my opinion, I believe that technology has brought both positive and negative effect.
First of all, technology makes us more closely wherever. Back to the past, people only used the letter to communicate with others in far distance but it took very long time to respond. With the development of technology, we can talk with friends or relatives everytime we want by a gadget such as smartphone, computer, laptop… It’s not only convenient but also immensely economic. For example, you can interact with your friends in America by a smartphone. It helps you see images of your friend throughout the screen, hear her voice with the fee of the internet, about 50.000 Vnd to 70.000 Vnd only.
On the other hand, technology sometimes affected us in a negative way. With the widespread of it, a lot of harmful effects appear. People become more lazily. They prefer to chat online to talk face to face. We can see a similar imagine – a crowded group who focus on their phones and don’t talk anything. It makes our relationship broken and faded in recent times.
To end up this problem, I think we should spend a plenty of time to think about the way we use technology. If we can explore the benefit of this and reduce its drawback, technology will provide us a huge convenience in daily life especially in communication.
In conclusion, thanks to the development of technology, it has changed the way of the relationship that we build and make our life more successful.
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