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Chimai111 Posted 4 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Topic : It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy life style in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is a widely-held belief among people that spending public money on disseminating a beneficial life style is more vital than on treating poorly individuals. Frankly, I share the view with the viewpoint in the topic for a variety of reasons.

“Protection is better than cure”, this sentence is a medical slogan and it is never wrong . Hence, when we rather paying govennment’s money on advocating a salubrious regime than treating the sick , we would help to deter the future health risks from happening before its begin. For illustration, since 2018, to prevent the spread of Corona viruses and to encourage local people to live a wholesome life, the Vietnamese government has promulgated methods such as giving out “5K message”, eating a nourishing diet, excercising to keep your lungs healthy and to protect inhabitants against COVID-19 . Successfully, even though Vietnam’s location is near the Corona viruses’s outbreak, we had contended for quite a long time until 2021 when COVID – 19 became a pandemic. When all the potential health risks are prevented, local individuals can concentrate more on their work, which leads to the blooming development of the nation.

What if we choose to devote money to cure illnesses of everyone without trying to prevent diseases, which may increase day by day, by promoting an advantageos life style ? People might keep being infected with these illnesses over and over again, even more and more. This problem can not only put huge pressures on medical staffs but also can become very costly to the government. Moreover, when inhabitants are not healthy enough due to get infected with diseases too much , they can’t meet the working criteria. This will decline the labor quality and potentially, may affect considerably the stable thriving of a country as the workforce is of importance.

To sum up, I am definitely of the same opinion with the idea in the topic.




  

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