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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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topic: how will monroe benefit me

Monroe college first caught my attention at a college fair at the University of Technology. I found their display alluring as they continued to persuade me, eluctuating the life of a Monroe college student; then and there I knew Monroe was the college for me to further my education. Furthering my education at Monroe will be benificial in an ample number of ways; not only to me but to what I have to contribute to your college, my family and my country, it would also expand my knowledge in practical nursing. A higher education at Monroe will give me a wider range of opportunities to grow academically while going in a once-in-an life time journey.  It would be a nice experience to go to a multicultural college, Monroe, even with a more rewarding career and a brighter future. Monroe will give me a chance to be adventurous and to explore the unknown first hand. 

        If I am given the opportunity to attend your noble institution and the privilege to be apart of the 2016 practical nursing group, it would be an honor and privilege.  As to the fact that not only will I be able to learn new morals or gain new knowledge but also to the fact that I will be well equipped and ready for the world of work. I am sure and positive that the experience , studies, knowledge and ethics given to me during my studies will educate me and prepare me for what is yet to come. I can say that if anything was to come my way, I would be ready and I would be able to take on the challenge. The education I will receive from Monroe will help me and other students to prosper in the future.
  

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I have highlighted some errors. Monroe college first caught my attention at a college fair at the University of Technology. ) continued to persuade me, eluctuating the life of a Monroe college student; then and there I knew Monroe was the college for me to further my education.

  • I have highlighted some errors.
  • Monroe college first caught my attention at a college fair at the University of Technology.
  • ) continued to persuade me, eluctuating the life of a Monroe college student; then and there I knew Monroe was the college for me to further my education.
  • Furthering my education at Monroe will be benificial in an ample number of ways ; not only to me but to what I have to contribute to your college, my family and my country , it would also expand my knowledge in practical nursing.
  • (run-on sentence) A higher education at Monroe will give me a wider range of opportunities to grow academically while going in a once-in- an life time journey.
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I have highlighted some errors.

Monroe college first caught my attention at a college fair at the University of Technology. I found their display alluring as they (antecedent?) continued to persuade me, eluctuating the life of a Monroe college student; then and there I knew Monroe was the college for me to further my education. Further

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