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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Topic formulation review/correction please

Dear all,

Could you please review my title for grammatical mistakes, it is important since it is the first thing my examiner would see from the whole paper. (this is a bachelor's thesis)Thanks a lot!

An analysis of the achievable and ambitious objectives of the TTIP negotiations exemplified by the case studies of the automotive and the genetically modified organism industries respectively.

I want to say that the automotive industry responds to the achievable objectives and the genetically modified organism industry to the ambitious objectives, therefore the specification "respectively" at the end of the title.

Thanks!
  
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