Topic: Do you think peple should be encouraged to eat ORGANIC FOOD? Why ? Why not?
To my opinion, people should be encouraged to eat organic food for these reasons. First of all, organic food prevents illness and diseases. Artificial chemicals are used popularly in conventional farming and maybe in these food we eat daily. This leads the appearance of unexpected illness to our health. Therefore, organic food which doesn't use any artificial chemicals in the growing of plants will be safe for consumers. Another point could be that organic method is safe for environment. Organic farming decrease the polluted environmet (like air pollution, soil pollution, water pollution) as soil erosion. Moreover, farming without the use of pesticides and other artificial products also good for people's health around here. Last but not leats, organic food tastes more delicious. Maybe organic food is grown without using any artificial chemicals contains higher value of nutritions. For that reason, some consumers suppose that organic food is more tasty than conventional food. Indeed , although it's not that almost organic food is good, some is good for our health. Therefor, people should eat more organic food.
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You need to organize this essay into a series of paragraphs . An introductory paragraph. A paragraph for each of your main points.
- You need to organize this essay into a series of paragraphs .
- An introductory paragraph.
- A paragraph for each of your main points.
- A concluding paragraph.
- Have you been taught about paragraphs yet?
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You need to organize this essay into a series of paragraphs
.An introductory paragraph.
A paragraph for each of your main points.
A concluding paragraph.
Have you been taught about paragraphs yet?
0While you are reorganizing your essay into paragraphs, consider making changes to the highlighted text.
To my opinion, people should be encouraged to eat organic food for these reasons. First of all, organic food prevents illness and diseases. Artificial chemicals are used popularly in conventional farming and
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