Topic: As children become adults, their social behavior change in some way. What are the main differences? To what extent are the change that take place good?

It is true that we change in many fundamental ways as we develop from young kids to mature adults, result in key differences in social behaviour and psychological changes. This essay will elaborate on the main differences and give explanation on whether these changes are positive or not.

Firstly, most young children tend to express themselves much more openly and naturally than when the grow older, showing their great extremes of happiness and misery. However, when they reach their adulthood, they learn to hide their real feelings and doing things more carefully, while children seem behave by their natural instinct. That means children have a very volatile relationships, for example, a group of kids could fall out and row with each other, but then they are back as close companions afterwards, nevertheless, grown-up people often make friends based on some purposes such as cooperation in business or commercial.

In my opinion, it is a good things that adults can retain childlike qualities in their social behaviour. Some significant changes will happen as a natural sense, but how their manners improve are depend on their traits and mostly by their parents' education and living environment. But I believe when people grow up, they will learn how to protect themselves, behave more carefully and cleverly, learn how to tackle issues and also learn how to keep their words in mind if it may hurts or disrespects other people, which are necessarily developments in their lives.

In conclusion, difference between a people in his childhood and adulthood is mainly the change in how they act in social life and I believe that this change is certainly positive due to these benefits.

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