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David1971 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Top of Resume, Stating reason for 3 year gap in Employment.

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00I am offering an explanation for sabbatical due to the gap it created in my work history. Thank you.02br
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00I am currently returning to the workforce from a 3 year sabbatical. I spent the previous 3 years to raise my daughter until she was prepared to enter pre-school. Before this sabbatical I did not have any breaks in service from any job since high school/college. This was a pre-arranged agreement between my wife and myself that she would take the time off for our first child and I would do the same for our second child.02br
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00Objective -02br
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00I would like to obtain a position in which I work directly with the clientele. I am also eager to find a position where I can utilize my past experience, education, and more so, my strong work ethic to advance within the Administrative/Financial services industry.02br
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00Please help with these paragraphs! I need this area of resume to look as gramatically correct as possible. I knew when the time came to go back to work this was going to be a pain in the a** explaining it on my resume!! Anyway, Thanks for your help and any ideas you may have.02br
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0Come on guys??? No help at all??? 0-

  • 0Come on guys???
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0Come on guys??? No help at all??? Did I go to the wrong area of this website for this correction request???0-
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0Saturdays are slow, David. We have real lives here - softball games, trips to Sears, battling the grocery store. Don't get too upset if we take a few hours to respond.02br
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00Are you looking for help on the paragraph about your gap? Don't put that on your resume! It is WAY to much information for any propsective employer to hear. Simply mention something about returning

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