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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Too many tenses in sentence, please tell me if correct?
Could you please help me correct this sentence?
1 Usually the first night you've won, you get your hopes up only to get your hopes crushed the following day because you will have lost all the money you had won the previous day.
Thank you
1 Usually the first night you've won, you get your hopes up only to get your hopes crushed the following day because you will have lost all the money you had won the previous day.
Thank you
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It's my take on it: Usually, on the first night when you've won and got your hopes up, there is the following day of the crushed expectations, for you will have lost all the money won the previous day.
- It's my take on it: Usually, on the first night when you've won and got your hopes up, there is the following day of the crushed expectations, for you will have lost all the money won the previous day.
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It's my take on it:
Usually, on the first night when you've won and got your hopes up, there is the following day of the crushed expectations, for you will have lost all the money won the previous day.
Usually, on the first night when you've won and got your hopes up, there is the following day of the crushed expectations, for you will have lost all the money won the previous day.
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