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Sailsofoblivion Posted 11 years ago
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Too many commas?

Is the punctuation of these sentences OK or do they employ too many commas?

I developed this further in the summer of 2015 when I interviewed David Bowie's former drummer, Woody Woodmansey, for CultNoise Magazine.

I am interested in establishing links with other creative professionals, discovering new publications to write for, and sharing my work with a larger audience. My professional website contains links to all of my previous publications, and excerpts from my portfolio.
  

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The only comma I would remove is the final one, following 'publications'. A series of two phases doesn't require a comma.

— Wilpeter

  • The only comma I would remove is the final one, following 'publications'.
  • A series of two phases doesn't require a comma.
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The only comma I would remove is the final one, following 'publications'. A series of two phases doesn't require a comma.
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wilpeterThe only comma I would remove is the final one, following 'publications'. A series of two phases doesn't require a comma.
Thanks a lot! So I'm guessing this sentence is correctly punctuated as there's more than two phrases?

My job involved the preparation and serving of breakfast to residents in the nursing home, feeding those who were unable
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