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Courtkanee Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

too choppy

I took a deep breath and quietly repeated, “it is okay“ and after a while, the pain subsided.

I can't figure out how to word this correctly. Any suggestions?
  

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It seems not too bad to me. How about-- I took a deep breath and repeated quietly, 'It's okay'. After a while, the pain subsided.

  • It seems not too bad to me.
  • How about-- I took a deep breath and repeated quietly, 'It's okay'.
  • After a while, the pain subsided.
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It seems not too bad to me. How about--

I took a deep breath and repeated quietly, 'It's okay'. After a while, the pain subsided.

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