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Contiluo Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Tongue-tied

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In 9th grade, each of us was assigned to form a group in advance to give an oral presentation of a special topic report. When my turn came, though I had memorized the transcript thoroughly, I still forgot the part of speech a lot during our presentation. When I stood on the stage, I remained tongue-tied for a long time. I was so nervous that my legs kept shaking and my speech was incoherent. Though I goofed up the presentation, I’ve learned about how to be rigorous, how to work in a team, and how to operate under tight deadline pressures and balancing priorities.
  

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In 9th grade, each of us was assigned asked to form a group in advance to give an oral presentation of a special topic report. When my turn came, though I had memorized the transcript thoroughly, I still forgot the part much of the speech a lot during our presentation. When I stood on the stage, I remained tongue-tied for a long time.

  • In 9th grade, each of us was assigned asked to form a group in advance to give an oral presentation of a special topic report.
  • When my turn came, though I had memorized the transcript thoroughly, I still forgot the part much of the speech a lot during our presentation.
  • When I stood on the stage, I remained tongue-tied for a long time.
  • I was so nervous that my legs kept shaking and my speech was incoherent.
  • Though I goofed up the presentation, I’ve learned about how to be rigorous, how to work in a team, and how to operate under tight deadline pressures and how to prioritize.
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In 9th grade, each of us was assigned asked to form a group in advance to give an oral presentation of a special topic report. When my turn came, though I had memorized the transcript thoroughly, I still forgot the part much of the speech a lot during our presentation. When I stood on the stage, I remained tongue-tied for a long time. I was so

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