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Moon7296 Posted 12 years ago
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Toeic speaking
Could you correct some awkward parts in the sentences below? I saw these sample answer sentences but there seems some awkward parts, in particular, in the underlined parts.
1. Due to the advancement of information technology such as personal computers and smartphones, we can access the Internet at anytime from anywhere so we can get the latest and useful information and materials for study and work.
2. Due to the advancement of information technology such as personal computers and smartphones, it's possible to bring new and better products and trends to the market. So we can benefit from them. We can buy products with just a click with our smartphones.
(Q.new and better products and<=(again and?) trends to the market?)
1. Due to the advancement of information technology such as personal computers and smartphones, we can access the Internet at anytime from anywhere so we can get the latest and useful information and materials for study and work.
2. Due to the advancement of information technology such as personal computers and smartphones, it's possible to bring new and better products and trends to the market. So we can benefit from them. We can buy products with just a click with our smartphones.
(Q.new and better products and<=(again and?) trends to the market?)
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moon7296 in particular, in the underlined parts. The underlined parts are idiomatic English—probably the most natural parts of those sentences. moon7296 Could you correct some awkward parts in the sentences OK: 1.
- moon7296 in particular, in the underlined parts.
- The underlined parts are idiomatic English—probably the most natural parts of those sentences.
- moon7296 Could you correct some awkward parts in the sentences OK: 1.
- Because of advancements in information technology such as personal computers and smartphones, we can access the Internet anytime from anywhere for the latest information and materials for study and work.
- 2.
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moon7296in particular, in the underlined parts.The underlined parts are idiomatic English—probably the most natural parts of those sentences.
moon7296Could you correct some awkward parts in the sentencesOK:
1. Because of advancements in information technology such as personal computers and smartphones, we can a
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