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Cachmere1987 Posted 11 years ago
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What are some important qualities of a good school teacher? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important
In 2015, to acquire knowledge, students have to go to schools, most of countries have strong education system. Teachers play a big role in transferring the knowledge to students.
First of all Teacher has to have some essential qualities before choosing this job. The first one is to love to teach and to explain things to others. And taking time to clarify. Teacher should like to take students to higher level of knowledge.
The second quality is the patience, teachers are teaching all kind of students, some have very high IQ, some they need more time to understand. So teacher should be willing to re-explain and to ensure that everyone in the classroom understand the lesson
In conclusion, Teachers are educating students who will be in future president and doctors, it is a big responsibility.
I hope someone can correct my below essay and I would appreciate if you can score it.
What are some important qualities of a good school teacher? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important
In 2015, to acquire knowledge, students have to go to schools, most of countries have strong education system. Teachers play a big role in transferring the knowledge to students.
First of all Teacher has to have some essential qualities before choosing this job. The first one is to love to teach and to explain things to others. And taking time to clarify. Teacher should like to take students to higher level of knowledge.
The second quality is the patience, teachers are teaching all kind of students, some have very high IQ, some they need more time to understand. So teacher should be willing to re-explain and to ensure that everyone in the classroom understand the lesson
In conclusion, Teachers are educating students who will be in future president and doctors, it is a big responsibility.
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In 2015 (Only in 2015? ) , to acquire knowledge, students have to go to schools, (comma splice error) most of (incorrect usage "of") countries have (incorrect omission of "a") strong education system. Teachers play a big role in transferring the (incorrect usage of "the") knowledge to students.
- In 2015 (Only in 2015?
- ) , to acquire knowledge, students have to go to schools, (comma splice error) most of (incorrect usage "of") countries have (incorrect omission of "a") strong education system.
- Teachers play a big role in transferring the (incorrect usage of "the") knowledge to students.
- First of all Teacher (incorrect capital, incorrect omission of an article) has to have some essential qualities before choosing this job.
- The first one is to love to teach and to explain things to others.
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In 2015 (Only in 2015? Not in 2014 or 2013?), to acquire knowledge, students have to go to schools, (comma splice error) most of (incorrect usage "of") countries have (incorrect omission of "a") strong education system. Teachers play a big role in transferring the (incorrect usage of "the") knowledge to students.
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