Toefl essays

hi i tried to write an essay to answer this question . I would appreciate it if you correct it and score it With the recent development in technology like e-books some people feel that the printed media like books, newspapers and magazine will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that those forms of media will never disappear.

Many people hold the opinion that the print media will soon be completely replaced by internet. Meanwhile others adhere an opposite direction. I agree with this statement because internet offers an easy and accessible way to news. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore below.

First of all, I must say that nowadays people are more busy. They are always requesting a faster and easy way to get the news. There is no doubt that internet gives access to many of information and news by one click. My experience in the university is a good example of what I mean. When I was in the university, I had to write many essays about different topics. I used to spend time to look for information in books and magazines; however when the university decided to enlarge the library and to provide students with internet access, my life changed completely. I had an access to millions of information by clicking on search. This was helpful and beneficial.

Moreover, in addition to the point mentioned above, the internet provides information in a different way than printed media. Internet presents news differently on videos, audios and pictures. This variety attracts people to use internet than printed media. In contract to the printed media, where the news are always provided on pages. This can be boring. Furthermore, the internet has huge sources of information. User can browse many sources in the same time. They don’t need to go to different libraries or buying many books.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that the printed media will be soon replaced by the internet. This because internet offers an easy and fast access to the information.