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Eitan Tom Godinger Posted 13 years ago
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180. In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The population have grown rapidly over this century researches indicate that in 1800 were 1 billion people in the world today there are 7 billion people and researchers are predicting that in 2020 going to be 8 billion and in 2030 more than 9 billion. This cause to demand for lands to be developed for housing and industry countries like Canada and Australia don't deal with those problems because the land is not limited like my country.

I am living in Israel witch located in the Middle East, very small country 400 km from the northern point to the southern point. Today there are 8 million people that make Israel to be one of the dense country in the world. 25% from the land inhabited (for example in Australia is 1%) because of that and because of the grow population we need more land for housing, industry and agriculture the problem is that we do not have many natural places left. The first premier minister of Israel had a goal to bloom the "Negev", the Negev is a harsh weather desert part that contain 60% of Israel's land and most of the Negev are not inhabits because of the harsh weather but if we could have bloomed the Negev we would have had a lot of essential land.

The second problem is: we do need land in its natural condition, There isn't only human on earth there are many other animals species which also need places to occupy and we need to regard that we need those animal and bugs they help to maintain the environment, and based on the population grow they are losing they dwelling and the land can't occupy both of us, so they harmed, Also the army basis starch on large surface, In fact the army understood the housing hardship so they offer to solders very chip rental houses.

The land in my country is a delicate situation we need more places for housing, industry, farming and also a nature places for the animals. Precious land in the holy land.
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Thanks for the helpers,
this question I really tryied to answer on the question but we do have problem with land, so I moved a bit from the main topic I hop it's good.
  

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In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. As you know, you have strayed off-topic.

  • In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry?
  • Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
  • As you know, you have strayed off-topic.
  • That will not be good in the eyes of people who will grade your essay.
  • The first paragraph should state your country and your thesis about its requirements for natural areas and developed area.
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In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

As you know, you have strayed off-topic. That will not be good in the eyes of people who will grade your essay. The first paragraph should state your
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The population has grown rapidly over this century, in 1800 there were 1 billion people in the world. Today there are 7 billion people and researchers are predicting that in 2020 there are going to be 8 billion, and in 2030 more than 9 billion. This increases the demand for lands to be developed for housing and industry. Countries like Canada and Australia don't deal w
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Hi Eitan,
There are still grammatical problems in your essay. The yellow highlighted words are incorrect. I have commented on other problems.

The population has grown rapidly over this century, (comma splice) in 1800 there were 1 billion people in the world. Today there are 7 billion people and researchers are predicting that in 2020 there are going to be

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