Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your opinion

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Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your opinion.

Today's teenagers face more pressure than ever before.I completely agree with this idea ,and will discuss the reason why in this essay .

First of all, teenagers nowadays feel pressure to acquire luxurious items as their peers. Through films and the media they can see the lastest technology, expensive jewellery,clothers and cars that their peers could have. In that case, teenagers may feel stressed when their ability to not allow these items.

A second major reason is the appearance of many addictive things in the modern life, especially the development of social nework. Nowadays teenagers tend to spend a lot of thime to sutfing newfeed on twitter, Facebook or Instagram. They can see many geat apects of other people's lives that causing them to be engulfed in self-comparison. This may lead to the sepression among young people, the phenomenon is very popular today.

In conclusion, the modern-day teenager feels more strain due to pressure. I believe that these pressures were also found in older times but they have become more powerful and apparent currently.Tod

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Today's teenagers face more pressure than ever before.I completely agree with this idea. ~~,and will discuss the reason why in this essay .~~

Never mention your essay in a thesis statement. Only state the position you are taking.

First of all, teenagers nowadays feel pressure to acquire luxurious items as their peers. (Wrong grammar. Do you mean they want to have the same luxury goods as their friends have? Or do you mean that the teenagers and their peers want to have luxury items?) Through films and the media they can see the lastest technology, expensive jewellery,clothers and cars that their peers could have. In that case, teenagers may feel stressed when their ability to not allow these items. (Wrong grammar. Do you mean their parents tell them "No" when they ask for these things?)

A second major reason is the appearance of many addictive things in the modern life, especially the development of social nework. (wrong word, wrong form) Nowadays teenagers tend to spend a lot of thime to sutfing newfeed on twitter, Facebook or Instagram. They can see many geat apects of other people's lives that causing them to be engulfed in self-comparison. This may lead to the sepression among young people, (comma splice error) the phenomenon is very popular today.

In conclusion, the modern-day teenager feels more strain due to pressure (from what?). I believe that these pressures were also found in older times but they have become more powerful and apparent currently.Tod

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Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your opinion

Nowadays people are moving very fast and somehow this is stressful for our juvenile lives than previous generations. In this essay, I am going to discuss my view with opinion.

Firstly, I would like to share that our children are influencing by their surrounding because sometimes this happens that friends are using expensive gadgets and that our children do not have and although they are aware as a parent we can not afford that for them. So they feel pressure to buy that expensive gadget or things for them to feel similar to others.

Secondly, they are trying to match with the celebrity, there glamour like a luxury car, house, cloths, lifestyle etc that is an effect on their mind. on the other hand, they have a plethora of pressure in school to gain full marks in the study to get a good score to feel proud for there parents. However, this is tough for them but they are planning to score good and if they fail then that impact on their career. for example, if we come to an advertisement that is also causing stress. at last, globalization is also playing a big role in stress than the previous generation.

on the flip side, if we talk about a few decades ago children have less stress in there life because they do not know the thing from which they can do a comparison but other things like hungriness, cloths etc effect there mind that time also.

In conclusion, I agree in modern days children feel more pressure than previous generation but their life is not tough like previous people.

Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your opinion

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