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Ayan86 Posted 9 years ago
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Your application of 18.11.2016 concerning the fact that front windshield of automobile MERCEDES with French license plate XXXX was damaged by snow that fell down from the rooftop of a building at 28 Harborow Street is now registered in the Electronic Journal of Incidents.

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2016 concerning the fact that the front windshield of the MERCEDES ( automobile ) with the French license plate XXXX was damaged by snow that fell down from the rooftop of the building at 28 Harborow Street is now registered in the Electronic Journal of Incidents.

  • 2016 concerning the fact that the front windshield of the MERCEDES ( automobile ) with the French license plate XXXX was damaged by snow that fell down from the rooftop of the building at 28 Harborow Street is now registered in the Electronic Journal of Incidents.
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Your application of 18.11.2016 concerning the fact that the front windshield of the MERCEDES ( automobile ) with the French license plate XXXX was damaged by snow that fell down from the rooftop of the building at 28 Harborow Street is now registered in the Electronic Journal of Incidents.

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