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Its4lice Posted 9 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics

To the sea or into the sea?

Hello everyone,

I'm new to this forum so I hope my topic belongs here, if not I apologize for the mess.

My girlfriend is writing lyrics for her new song and she needs help with this sentence:

I'm falling down on the open sea.

That's the original now, but neither of us is sure if it should be 'into the open sea' or maybe 'in the open sea'. If you have any other propositions, we would love to hear them, too.


Thank you so much for any help,
Alice

  

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Hello, Alice, and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member. Its4lice either of us is sure if it should be 'into the open sea' or maybe 'in the open sea'.

  • Hello, Alice, and welcome to English Forums.
  • Thank you for registering as a member.
  • Its4lice either of us is sure if it should be 'into the open sea' or maybe 'in the open sea'.
  • I think 'into' sounds much more reasonable.
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Hello, Alice, and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.

Its4liceeither of us is sure if it should be 'into the open sea' or maybe 'in the open sea'.

I think 'into' sounds much more reasonable.

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