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Antonia Posted 21 years ago
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to sail on board of ships
Hello!
Can you please tell me if this phrase is OK in the context:
In this show, after more than a decade actors AB and CD met again on stage, acting as marvellously as always and attracting the audiences to sail on board of ships provided by Croatian Navy every night from X to Y.
The show is staged on an island and spectators are transported by ship.
Thank you
Can you please tell me if this phrase is OK in the context:
In this show, after more than a decade actors AB and CD met again on stage, acting as marvellously as always and attracting the audiences to sail on board of ships provided by Croatian Navy every night from X to Y.
The show is staged on an island and spectators are transported by ship.
Thank you
Top answer
First of all, "the audiences to sail on board of ships" would have to be changed to "audiences to sail aboard ships". However, the entire sentence sounds a bit awkward to me. Without knowing precisely what you are wishing to be made known, I would to change it to something like the following: After more than a decade, AB and CD met again on stage.
- First of all, "the audiences to sail on board of ships" would have to be changed to "audiences to sail aboard ships".
- However, the entire sentence sounds a bit awkward to me.
- Without knowing precisely what you are wishing to be made known, I would to change it to something like the following: After more than a decade, AB and CD met again on stage.
- Acting as marvellously as ever in the show, they made many audience members willing to climb aboard the ships of the Croation Navy as they set sail every night from X to Y.
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First of all, "the audiences to sail on board of ships" would have to be changed to "audiences to sail aboard ships". However, the entire sentence sounds a bit awkward to me. Without knowing precisely what you are wishing to be made known, I would to change it to something like the following:
After more than a decade, AB and CD met again on stage. Acting as marvellously as ever in t
After more than a decade, AB and CD met again on stage. Acting as marvellously as ever in t
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Thank you for your post. Can we say instead of audience members spectators?
as they set sail every night from X to Y. Who sets sails? Ships or spectators?
Thank you
as they set sail every night from X to Y. Who sets sails? Ships or spectators?
Thank you
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