I wrote the following sentence while I was writing an essay about university courses. However, my instincts said to ask someone to review this sentence. Therefore, I would really appreciate it if someone could review the following sentence and let me know if there is any required modifications.
In other words, in the context of contemporary industries and career opportunities, for the majority of students, not only would studying technological subjects could increase the probability of achieving higher salaries, but it also could cause to be attracted by excellent companies without much difficulty.
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