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The aim of oil processing is to produce/production of derivates of certain characteristics which are used as fuels and greases, as well as raw materials in petrochemical industry.
  

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Hi, Can you please tell me if my sentence is ok? The aim of oil processing is to produce/production of derivates of certain characteristics which are used as fuels and greases, as well as raw materials in petrochemical industry. Say 'the production of derivates' or 'to produce derivates'.

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  • Hi, Can you please tell me if my sentence is ok?
  • The aim of oil processing is to produce/production of derivates of certain characteristics which are used as fuels and greases, as well as raw materials in petrochemical industry.
  • Say 'the production of derivates' or 'to produce derivates'.
  • Do you really need to say 'of certain characteristics', it seems rather general and vague?
  • The aim of oil processing is the production of derivates , of/with certain characteristics , which are used as fuels and greases, as well as raw materials in the petrochemical industry.
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Hi,

Can you please tell me if my sentence is ok?

The aim of oil processing is to produce/production of derivates of certain characteristics which are used as fuels and greases, as well as raw materials in petrochemical industry.

Say 'the production of derivates' or 'to produce derivates'. Do you re
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