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Antonija Posted 12 years ago
Vocabulary

To present to you

Hello everybody,
Can you tell me does it sound natural and is it correct? I am not sure about the verb to present. It sounds akward present to you. Can you help me make it sound more business-like?

We welcome the opportunity to present to you our clinic and its experienced highly-professional and cordial team of dental specialists.

Thank you in advance
Kind regards
Antonija
  

Top answer

It is over the top. Try to control your adjectives! This is all you need: We welcome the opportunity to show you our clinic and our professional team of dental specialists.

— Mister Micawber

  • It is over the top.
  • Try to control your adjectives!
  • This is all you need: We welcome the opportunity to show you our clinic and our professional team of dental specialists.
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It is over the top. Try to control your adjectives! This is all you need:

We welcome the opportunity to show you our clinic and our professional team of dental specialists.
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