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Avid learner Posted 12 years ago
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Hi,

Is this sentence correct?

Her approval is an impetus to my advancement in achieving the managerial position.

Thanks, A.L.
  

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I think it is OK. I think advancement in can be removed, as it sounds redundant. Her approval is an impetus to my (advancement in) achieving the managerial position.

— Vsuresh

  • I think it is OK.
  • I think advancement in can be removed, as it sounds redundant.
  • Her approval is an impetus to my (advancement in) achieving the managerial position.
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I think it is OK. I think advancement in can be removed, as it sounds redundant.

Her approval is an impetus to my (advancement in) achieving the managerial position.
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