Is this sentence correct:
"Sitting on the beach, I looked to my right, and I saw there was a foreign family."
" I'd delete the comma after right. And you don't need the second I. How can you tell that a family is foreign, just by looking at them?
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"Sitting on the beach, I looked to my right, and I saw there was a foreign family."
I'd delete the comma after right. And you don't need the second I.
How can you tell that a family is foreign, just by looking at them?
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