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Daniel5 Posted 22 years ago
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Since I voluntered to leave and come back monday, she gave me until monday to have a final draft. So could you please to me how this sound and give me some feedback.

After interviewing my mother, I continued my I-Search Paper by collecting my sources. I found the majority of my sources from the internet and EBSCO Host, which included USA Todya, Time magazines, and articles that author had written. Other sources that I found came from Nursing 2002-2004 magazines. As I read over some of my sources, I found that my mother did not anwer all of my question, but the one she did answered were true fully. Please if you can me some feedback my monday.
  

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After interviewing my mother, I continued my I-Search [unfamiliar term to me] Paper by finding more sources. ] had written. As I learned more, I found that my mother did not anwer all of my questionS, but the oneS she did answered were CORRECT..

  • After interviewing my mother, I continued my I-Search [unfamiliar term to me] Paper by finding more sources.
  • ] had written.
  • As I learned more, I found that my mother did not anwer all of my questionS, but the oneS she did answered were CORRECT..
  • Please if you can me some feedback my monday.
  • I used capital letters or brackets where I made changes.
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After interviewing my mother, I continued my I-Search [unfamiliar term to me] Paper by finding more sources. I found the majority of my sources from the internet and EBSCO Host, which included USA TodAY, Time magazines, Nursing 2002-2004 magazines, and articles that author [which author?] had written. As I learned more, I found that my mother did not anwer all of my questionS, but the oneS she di

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