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Daniel5 Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
To mountainhiker
She says it a I-Search because it me doing the research. But can tell me this how did the overall paper sound? Or did it even sound like a report?
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daniel5, I am not sure what the expectations were. The original essay seemed like a short essay. Your "sources" report seems odd in that you mention a lot of different sources, but your original essay does not use very much information.
- daniel5, I am not sure what the expectations were.
- The original essay seemed like a short essay.
- Your "sources" report seems odd in that you mention a lot of different sources, but your original essay does not use very much information.
- It is merely a story about your mom.
- If you were doing a serious story on high blood pressure, I would have expected to see facts and figures.
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daniel5,
I am not sure what the expectations were. The original essay seemed like a short essay. Your "sources" report seems odd in that you mention a lot of different sources, but your original essay does not use very much information. It is merely a story about your mom.
If you were doing a serious story on high blood pressure, I would have expected to see facts and figur
I am not sure what the expectations were. The original essay seemed like a short essay. Your "sources" report seems odd in that you mention a lot of different sources, but your original essay does not use very much information. It is merely a story about your mom.
If you were doing a serious story on high blood pressure, I would have expected to see facts and figur
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