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Jackson6612 Posted 17 years ago
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To me, to be an educated person has a very different meaning.
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To me, to be an educated person has a very different meaning. A person having a degree in mathematics is professionally educated. He knows how to add numbers. Perhaps, he doesn't know anyting else like history, politics, you can say social sciences, in general. Likewise a person having a degree in physics can have more knowledge about the outside world than about his own world. Professionally, a laborer is also beneficial to the society. So, a real educated person is the one who is beneficial to the society in every way. To be a real educated person you hav to educate yourself.
To me, to be an educated person has a very different meaning. A person having a degree in mathematics is professionally educated. He knows how to add numbers. Perhaps, he doesn't know anyting else like history, politics, you can say social sciences, in general. Likewise a person having a degree in physics can have more knowledge about the outside world than about his own world. Professionally, a laborer is also beneficial to the society. So, a real educated person is the one who is beneficial to the society in every way. To be a real educated person you hav to educate yourself.
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Jackson6612 To me, to be an educated person has a very different meaning. This is written like it is expecting to include what it is different from. Maybe you mean it has " a number of meanings" Jackson6612 Perhaps, he doesn't know anyting else like history, politics, you can say social sciences, in general "anyting" should be "anything".
- Jackson6612 To me, to be an educated person has a very different meaning.
- This is written like it is expecting to include what it is different from.
- Maybe you mean it has " a number of meanings" Jackson6612 Perhaps, he doesn't know anyting else like history, politics, you can say social sciences, in general "anyting" should be "anything".
- " I think "so you can say social sciences in general".
- (no comma after sciences) Jackson6612 So, a real educated person is the one who is beneficial to the society in every way.
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Jackson6612To me, to be an educated person has a very different meaning.
This is written like it is expecting to include what it is different from.
Maybe you mean it has " a number of meanings"
Jackson6612Perhaps, he doesn't know anyting else like history, politics, you can say social sciences, in general"any
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Thank you, Jeannie.
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