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Oerwahfm Posted 17 years ago
The inadequacy of support of information technology application in providing services and to monitor the compliance of the taxpayer.
Does my sentence sound write? Anyone? It doesn't sound natural, does it? Too many 'of' I think, the use of 'of' is already right or wrong?
Many Thanks
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To many 'of' preposition, pls help
The inadequacy of support of information technology application in providing services and to monitor the compliance of the taxpayer.
Does my sentence sound write? Anyone? It doesn't sound natural, does it? Too many 'of' I think, the use of 'of' is already right or wrong?
Many Thanks
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"Inadequacy" is the subject of your sentence, but there's no verb. Everything you've written describes what kind of inadequacy you're talking about, but you don't say what it does or what it is. ") The inadequacy to provide and to monitor OR The inadequacy in providing and monitoring The inadequacy etc.
- "Inadequacy" is the subject of your sentence, but there's no verb.
- Everything you've written describes what kind of inadequacy you're talking about, but you don't say what it does or what it is.
- ") The inadequacy to provide and to monitor OR The inadequacy in providing and monitoring The inadequacy etc.
- in providing etc.
- and in monitoring etc.
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"Inadequacy" is the subject of your sentence, but there's no verb. Everything you've written describes what kind of inadequacy you're talking about, but you don't say what it does or what it is.
An example of an action verb would be, "The inadequacy causes people to be angry." "The inadequacy makes the tax payers lax in reporting."
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An example of an action verb would be, "The inadequacy causes people to be angry." "The inadequacy makes the tax payers lax in reporting."
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