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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

To make outside calls

For a "written" description on how to use a room phone in a vacation rental, could you please tell me if following sentences are intelligible and natural?

To make outside calls from your room, a deposit must be made at front desk. When making a phone call, press ”0” to start. Any remaining balance of the deposit is refundable during reception hours before checking out.
  

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It would work as it is. I would write: To make outside calls from your room, a deposit must be paid at the front desk. Any remaining balance will be refunded when you check out.

  • It would work as it is.
  • I would write: To make outside calls from your room, a deposit must be paid at the front desk.
  • Any remaining balance will be refunded when you check out.
  • To make a call, press ”0” to start.
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It would work as it is. I would write:
To make outside calls from your room, a deposit must be paid at the front desk. Any remaining balance will be refunded when you check out. To make a call, press ”0” to start.

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