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To make good progress...

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Her willingness to learn English enabled her to make good progress in English. She demonstrated a genuine concern for improving her English skills with a sincere desire to succeed.
  

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Her willingness to learn English enabled her to make good progress. She demonstrated a genuine concern for improving her English skills and a sincere desire to succeed.

  • Her willingness to learn English enabled her to make good progress.
  • She demonstrated a genuine concern for improving her English skills and a sincere desire to succeed.
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Her willingness to learn English enabled her to make good progress. She demonstrated a genuine concern for improving her English skills and a sincere desire to succeed.

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